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advice would be appreciated

Unread postby Rex1us » Sat Aug 13, 2016 7:02 am

A painting I worked on maybe a bit too much. Overall I'm quite satisfied, but I feel like it could use more flair. Something seems off, but I don't know what, or how to add it.

all tips are suggestions are welcome :)
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Re: advice would be appreciated

Unread postby Jah » Sat Aug 20, 2016 4:51 pm

push the values, add some cast shadows
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Re: advice would be appreciated

Unread postby monojoli » Sun Nov 05, 2017 11:51 am

its a great critique. i will make some change in it and share here later.
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Re: advice would be appreciated

Unread postby BeezleBubRoss » Wed Dec 06, 2017 6:53 am

Kinda fudged around with the anatomy a little. Watch your center line on the face. I have this same issue too, tending to flatten out the face or force a turn without realizing. Moved the left leg (her right) a little, shrunk the waist a tad. But take this all with a grain of salt. I also agree with the contrast and color from the previous reply. But overall, great start!

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