Finished work, critique needed!

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Finished work, critique needed!

Unread postby East » Wed Jun 21, 2017 6:06 pm

Hello! I would like some constructive criticism on this piece.
A red fox that gives that carefree and chilled expression.

What I'm looking for specifically is the body figure/expression, values and color, and if you would like to critique the character itself as well, that's fine by me I would like to know more about giving a story to my characters in the future.
Thanks for the help. :)
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Re: Finished work, critique needed!

Unread postby Mike086 » Fri Jul 07, 2017 8:16 am

I recorded a critique for you and touched on everything you see below. Cool Character!
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You can jump to the 8min marker and watch the video and drawing process with commentary:
https://www.twitch.tv/videos/157266938
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Re: Finished work, critique needed!

Unread postby Mike086 » Fri Jul 07, 2017 8:21 am

oh man I sound so tired, any way I hope this helps!
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Re: Finished work, critique needed!

Unread postby East » Wed Jul 19, 2017 2:57 pm

Thank you! I really appreciate the time and effort you put doing this, I'll check it out. Sorry for the late reply, I've been off for a bit.

Edit: Thanks for the critique and I agreed of most of what you said. You didn't hold back and said what you felt and I thank you for that. I most likely used the wrong term to describe about this character and whatnot lol. Anyway, I took some notes on what I needed to work on, again thanks for critique. Better than having none at all and kept being ignorant. :D

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